27.3.14

WALT edit our work Success Criteria I will have full stops in the correct place. I will have capitals at the start of all my sentences

On the weekends I went to Ataahuais houes.  It was on cool Bronos birthday.  I was riding Tamaitis bike.
I was riding down hills when I saw my brother gdo porants coming up the hill.


In the weekend I went to Ataahua's house.  It was uncle Bruno's birthday.  I was riding Tamaiti's
bike.
I was riding down the hill, when I saw my god parent's coming up the hill.

Kelly Naea

3.3.14

Opononi

We went to Opononi to learn how to row a waka.  We were all scared, until we put on our life jackets.

Then we hopped inside the waka while it was on the sand so we could get use to it.

Then we went down to the water and hopped into the waka.
 We started to practice holding toe hoe in our hands  and then...
                  away we went rowing down the moana.
We learnt that to make a waka move we need to all work together as a team.