27.3.14

WALT edit our work Success Criteria I will have full stops in the correct place. I will have capitals at the start of all my sentences

On the weekends I went to Ataahuais houes.  It was on cool Bronos birthday.  I was riding Tamaitis bike.
I was riding down hills when I saw my brother gdo porants coming up the hill.


In the weekend I went to Ataahua's house.  It was uncle Bruno's birthday.  I was riding Tamaiti's
bike.
I was riding down the hill, when I saw my god parent's coming up the hill.

Kelly Naea
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2 comments:

  1. Miss Simeon27 March 2014 at 16:54

    Kia ora Room 2! I am so glade you a learning to punctuate writing. Did you know if you punctuate incorrectly you can change the whole meaning of your sentence you wrote. So keep on learning Room 2, so that you become confident writers.

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  2. Anonymous18 April 2014 at 17:26

    Well done Kelly!
    You have definitely succeeded in your WALT criteria and also written a nice piece of writing recounting a moment on the weekend. Keep up the good work.

    Thank you Room 2 and Whaea Rosina for showing us what Room 2 are learning.

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